Revival Dawn - One Piece RP
Would you like to react to this message? Create an account in a few clicks or log in to continue.
Switch Account



Latest topics
[World Event] A Fool's ErrandThu Jul 25, 2024 8:35 pmVolo Rosso[Arc] [Rubeck Island Conquest][Part 2] Last Tango in Rubeck Sun Jul 21, 2024 6:57 amMaxwell[Episode] Corruption of BloodSun Jul 14, 2024 3:51 amYumiko[Episode] Mink-staken IdentityThu Jul 04, 2024 6:28 amYumiko[Board] Quest Requests and Quest GradingsSat Jun 29, 2024 9:00 pmGray[Episode] Now, where am I?Sat Jun 29, 2024 8:56 pmGray[Episode] Waking MonstersSat Jun 29, 2024 12:00 pmGray[Abandoned] [Arc] [Tequila Wolf Conquest] The Rotten Lie of Tequila WolfTue Jun 25, 2024 3:23 pmGray[Market] [Shop] The Shop of DreamsSun Jun 23, 2024 5:11 pmGray

[Archived Claims] [2020-09-02] Devil Fruit Claims

+14
Ryoichi Ayugai
Francis
Emi Roromiya
Karl Friedrich
Yumiko
Emmaline Kingsley
Sabian McQueen
Acacia
Goldmonger
Beatriz
Butch
Anton La'croix
Castor O. Nox
Gray
18 posters
Go down
Anonymous
Guest
Guest

[Archived Claims] [2020-09-02] Devil Fruit Claims - Page 4 Empty Re: [Archived Claims] [2020-09-02] Devil Fruit Claims

This post has in-line assessment comments.Sun Jul 24, 2016 6:34 am
Character Name: Earl D. Campbell
Devil Fruit Name: Fuwa Fuwa No Mi
Type: Paramecia
Description: The Fuwa Fuwa no Mi is a Paramecia-type Devil Fruit that allows the user to levitate themselves and non-living things into the air.
Code:

[b]Fuwa Fuwa No Mi (Float-Float Fruit)[/b] belongs to [u]Earl D. Campbell[/u].
Anonymous
Guest
Guest

[Archived Claims] [2020-09-02] Devil Fruit Claims - Page 4 Empty Re: [Archived Claims] [2020-09-02] Devil Fruit Claims

This post has in-line assessment comments.Mon Jul 25, 2016 2:18 am
Character Name: Bevin K. Ciogach
Devil Fruit Name: Hiya Hiya no mi(Cold Cold Fruit)
Type: Paramecia
Description: Upon consumption of this fruit, the user becomes a 'Cold Human'. The user is capable of emitting cold energy, and controlling it. The user is capable of producing cold energy up to absolute zero. However, the colder that the user makes it the less control they have over the cold energy that they emit. The user is subject to the same weaknesses as regular fruits, and is in complete opposition of the Atsu Atsu no mi(Hot Hot Fruit). The user is immune to the Cold, and Cold-related Abilities. However, Haki-laced abilities of this nature can still affect the user.
Code:

[b]Hiya Hiya no mi(Cold Cold Fruit)[/b] belongs to [u]Bevin K. Ciogach[/u].
Gray
Gray
The Conqueror / Black Fist
[tracker=/t131-tracker-gray-starks#504]
Name : Gray
Epithet : "The Conqueror"; "Black Fist"
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" (310 cm)
Weight : 1043 lbs (473 kg)
Species : Cyborg Human
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Lurking Legend (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Role : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Bounty : [ber=r] 5,000,000,000
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.20
Shop Discount : -30%
Balance : [bel] 25,000,000,000
[[strollingdeath]][[baneoftheweak]][[riseandshine]][[childofdestiny]][[freakofnature]]
[[punchoutguru]][[dulcetvirtuoso]]

[[improviseadaptovercome]]
Posts : 3907

[Archived Claims] [2020-09-02] Devil Fruit Claims - Page 4 Empty Re: [Archived Claims] [2020-09-02] Devil Fruit Claims

This post has in-line assessment comments.Mon Jul 25, 2016 1:28 pm
[Archived Claims] [2020-09-02] Devil Fruit Claims - Page 4 Fdzj9w

Bevin K. Ciogath wrote:Character Name: Bevin K. Ciogach
Devil Fruit Name: Hiya Hiya no mi(Cold Cold Fruit)
Type: Paramecia
Description: Upon consumption of this fruit, the user becomes a 'Cold Human'. The user is capable of emitting cold energy, and controlling it. The user is capable of producing cold energy up to absolute zero. However, the colder that the user makes it the less control they have over the cold energy that they emit. The user is subject to the same weaknesses as regular fruits, and is in complete opposition of the Atsu Atsu no mi(Hot Hot Fruit). The user is immune to the Cold, and Cold-related Abilities. However, Haki-laced abilities of this nature can still affect the user.
Code:

[b]Hiya Hiya no mi(Cold Cold Fruit)[/b] belongs to [u]Bevin K. Ciogach[/u].
Anonymous
Guest
Guest

[Archived Claims] [2020-09-02] Devil Fruit Claims - Page 4 Empty Re: [Archived Claims] [2020-09-02] Devil Fruit Claims

This post has in-line assessment comments.Sun Jul 31, 2016 1:10 pm
Sorry about this, but I'm changing my claimed fruit and opening up my custom Hiya Hiya no mi for anyone to use.


Character Name: Bevin K. Ciocach
Devil Fruit Name: Buki Buki no mi(Weapon Weapon Fruit)
Type: Paramecia
Description: This devil fruit turns the user into a 'Weapon Projection Human'. By grasping something in the user's hand(s), the user is able to turn anything into any weapon that the user has seen before. This however does not allow for the user to create a massive jumbo cannon and fire it. This Devil Fruit's powers are limited to handheld weaponry, like Bows, Swords, Spears, Quarterstaffs, Arrows, Knives, Axes, etc. The user however is unable to form firearms or most explosives of any kind with this Devil Fruit.

The user may not replicate the effects of sea prism stone on their weapons. When a weapon comes in contact with sea prism stone it goes back to what it was before it was turned into a weapon. When it comes to all weapons, once it leaves her hands, they change back after a little while.
Code:

[b]Buki Buki no mi(Weapon Weapon Fruit)[/b] belongs to [u]Bevin K. Ciocach[/u].


Last edited by Bevin K. Ciogach on Sun Jul 31, 2016 2:29 pm; edited 2 times in total
Gray
Gray
The Conqueror / Black Fist
[tracker=/t131-tracker-gray-starks#504]
Name : Gray
Epithet : "The Conqueror"; "Black Fist"
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" (310 cm)
Weight : 1043 lbs (473 kg)
Species : Cyborg Human
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Lurking Legend (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Role : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Bounty : [ber=r] 5,000,000,000
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.20
Shop Discount : -30%
Balance : [bel] 25,000,000,000
[[strollingdeath]][[baneoftheweak]][[riseandshine]][[childofdestiny]][[freakofnature]]
[[punchoutguru]][[dulcetvirtuoso]]

[[improviseadaptovercome]]
Posts : 3907

[Archived Claims] [2020-09-02] Devil Fruit Claims - Page 4 Empty Re: [Archived Claims] [2020-09-02] Devil Fruit Claims

This post has in-line assessment comments.Sun Jul 31, 2016 2:18 pm
Earl wrote:Character Name: Earl D. Campbell
Devil Fruit Name: Fuwa Fuwa No Mi
Type: Paramecia
Description: The Fuwa Fuwa no Mi is a Paramecia-type Devil Fruit that allows the user to levitate themselves and non-living things into the air.
Code:

[b]Fuwa Fuwa No Mi (Float-Float Fruit)[/b] belongs to [u]Earl D. Campbell[/u].

You need to add the bit we talked about, where you explain whether this fruit allows you to control the buoyancy of objects, and to what extent.
Gray
Gray
The Conqueror / Black Fist
[tracker=/t131-tracker-gray-starks#504]
Name : Gray
Epithet : "The Conqueror"; "Black Fist"
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" (310 cm)
Weight : 1043 lbs (473 kg)
Species : Cyborg Human
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Lurking Legend (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Role : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Bounty : [ber=r] 5,000,000,000
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.20
Shop Discount : -30%
Balance : [bel] 25,000,000,000
[[strollingdeath]][[baneoftheweak]][[riseandshine]][[childofdestiny]][[freakofnature]]
[[punchoutguru]][[dulcetvirtuoso]]

[[improviseadaptovercome]]
Posts : 3907

[Archived Claims] [2020-09-02] Devil Fruit Claims - Page 4 Empty Re: [Archived Claims] [2020-09-02] Devil Fruit Claims

This post has in-line assessment comments.Sun Jul 31, 2016 2:21 pm
Please do add the bit where the weapon turns into its original form after a while, once it leaves the user's hands. Otherwise, you would be able to become an infinite weapon merchant with the ultimate get-rich-quick scheme.

Bevin K. Ciogach wrote:Sorry about this, but I'm changing my claimed fruit and opening up my custom Hiya Hiya no mi for anyone to use.


Character Name: Bevin K. Ciocach
Devil Fruit Name: Buki Buki no mi(Weapon Weapon Fruit)
Type: Paramecia
Description: This devil fruit turns the user into a 'Weapon Projection Human'. By grasping something in the user's hand(s), the user is able to turn anything into any weapon that the user has seen before. This however does not allow for the user to create a massive jumbo cannon and fire it. This Devil Fruit's powers are limited to handheld weaponry, like Bows, Swords, Spears, Quarterstaffs, Arrows, Knives, Axes, etc. The user however is unable to form firearms of any kind with this Devil Fruit.

The user may not replicate the effects of sea prism stone on their weapons. When a weapon comes in contact with sea prism stone it goes back to what it was before it was turned into a weapon. When it comes to weapons like throwing knives, and arrows, the weapon has a limited amount of time before it changes back into whatever it was beforehand.
Code:

[b]Buki Buki no mi(Weapon Weapon Fruit)[/b] belongs to [u]Bevin K. Ciocach[/u].
Anonymous
Guest
Guest

[Archived Claims] [2020-09-02] Devil Fruit Claims - Page 4 Empty Re: [Archived Claims] [2020-09-02] Devil Fruit Claims

This post has in-line assessment comments.Sun Jul 31, 2016 2:30 pm
Bevin K. Ciogach wrote:Sorry about this, but I'm changing my claimed fruit and opening up my custom Hiya Hiya no mi for anyone to use.


Character Name: Bevin K. Ciocach
Devil Fruit Name: Buki Buki no mi(Weapon Weapon Fruit)
Type: Paramecia
Description: This devil fruit turns the user into a 'Weapon Projection Human'. By grasping something in the user's hand(s), the user is able to turn anything into any weapon that the user has seen before. This however does not allow for the user to create a massive jumbo cannon and fire it. This Devil Fruit's powers are limited to handheld weaponry, like Bows, Swords, Spears, Quarterstaffs, Arrows, Knives, Axes, etc. The user however is unable to form firearms or most explosives of any kind with this Devil Fruit.

The user may not replicate the effects of sea prism stone on their weapons. When a weapon comes in contact with sea prism stone it goes back to what it was before it was turned into a weapon. When it comes to all weapons, once it leaves her hands, they change back after a little while.
Code:

[b]Buki Buki no mi(Weapon Weapon Fruit)[/b] belongs to [u]Bevin K. Ciocach[/u].

Edited
Gray
Gray
The Conqueror / Black Fist
[tracker=/t131-tracker-gray-starks#504]
Name : Gray
Epithet : "The Conqueror"; "Black Fist"
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" (310 cm)
Weight : 1043 lbs (473 kg)
Species : Cyborg Human
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Lurking Legend (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Role : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Bounty : [ber=r] 5,000,000,000
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.20
Shop Discount : -30%
Balance : [bel] 25,000,000,000
[[strollingdeath]][[baneoftheweak]][[riseandshine]][[childofdestiny]][[freakofnature]]
[[punchoutguru]][[dulcetvirtuoso]]

[[improviseadaptovercome]]
Posts : 3907

[Archived Claims] [2020-09-02] Devil Fruit Claims - Page 4 Empty Re: [Archived Claims] [2020-09-02] Devil Fruit Claims

This post has in-line assessment comments.Sun Jul 31, 2016 9:25 pm
[Archived Claims] [2020-09-02] Devil Fruit Claims - Page 4 Fdzj9w

Bevin K. Ciogach wrote:Sorry about this, but I'm changing my claimed fruit and opening up my custom Hiya Hiya no mi for anyone to use.


Character Name: Bevin K. Ciocach
Devil Fruit Name: Buki Buki no mi(Weapon Weapon Fruit)
Type: Paramecia
Description: This devil fruit turns the user into a 'Weapon Projection Human'. By grasping something in the user's hand(s), the user is able to turn anything into any weapon that the user has seen before. This however does not allow for the user to create a massive jumbo cannon and fire it. This Devil Fruit's powers are limited to handheld weaponry, like Bows, Swords, Spears, Quarterstaffs, Arrows, Knives, Axes, etc. The user however is unable to form firearms or most explosives of any kind with this Devil Fruit.

The user may not replicate the effects of sea prism stone on their weapons. When a weapon comes in contact with sea prism stone it goes back to what it was before it was turned into a weapon. When it comes to all weapons, once it leaves her hands, they change back after a little while.
Code:

[b]Buki Buki no mi(Weapon Weapon Fruit)[/b] belongs to [u]Bevin K. Ciocach[/u].
Anonymous
Guest
Guest

[Archived Claims] [2020-09-02] Devil Fruit Claims - Page 4 Empty Re: [Archived Claims] [2020-09-02] Devil Fruit Claims

This post has in-line assessment comments.Sun Oct 16, 2016 12:30 am
Character Name: Nathan Greys
Devil Fruit Name: Kaeru Kaeru no Mi, Model: Monkey Tree Frog | Frog Frog no mi, Model: Monkey Tree Frog ((Who knew picking a frog could be so difficult?))
Type: Zoan
Description: Consumption of this fruit allows the consumer to become a Monkey Tree Frog Human. Allows user to turn partially or fully into a Monkey Tree Frog. General frog attributes are gained such as increased leg strength/ jumping, wall climbing, Strong tongue, and super hearing. Also allows the user to make use of some of the medical and defensive properties of frogs' skin. More specifically to the Monkey Tree Frog, the user is able to generate a powerful morphine-like substance.
Code:

[b]Your Kaeru Kaeru no Mi, Model: Monkey Tree Frog {Frog Frog Fruit: Monkey Tree Frog} [/b] belongs to [u] Nathan Greys[/u].
Gray
Gray
The Conqueror / Black Fist
[tracker=/t131-tracker-gray-starks#504]
Name : Gray
Epithet : "The Conqueror"; "Black Fist"
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" (310 cm)
Weight : 1043 lbs (473 kg)
Species : Cyborg Human
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Lurking Legend (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Role : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Bounty : [ber=r] 5,000,000,000
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.20
Shop Discount : -30%
Balance : [bel] 25,000,000,000
[[strollingdeath]][[baneoftheweak]][[riseandshine]][[childofdestiny]][[freakofnature]]
[[punchoutguru]][[dulcetvirtuoso]]

[[improviseadaptovercome]]
Posts : 3907

[Archived Claims] [2020-09-02] Devil Fruit Claims - Page 4 Empty Re: [Archived Claims] [2020-09-02] Devil Fruit Claims

This post has in-line assessment comments.Mon Oct 17, 2016 4:30 pm
Greys wrote:Character Name: Nathan Greys
Devil Fruit Name: Kaeru Kaeru no Mi, Model: Monkey Tree Frog | Frog Frog no mi, Model: Monkey Tree Frog ((Who knew picking a frog could be so difficult?))
Type: Zoan
Description: Consumption of this fruit allows the consumer to become a Monkey Tree Frog Human. Allows user to turn partially or fully into a Monkey Tree Frog. General frog attributes are gained such as increased leg strength/ jumping, wall climbing, Strong tongue, and super hearing. Also allows the user to make use of some of the medical and defensive properties of frogs' skin. More specifically to the Monkey Tree Frog, the user is able to generate a powerful morphine-like substance.
Code:

[b]Your Kaeru Kaeru no Mi, Model: Monkey Tree Frog {Frog Frog Fruit: Monkey Tree Frog} [/b] belongs to [u] Nathan Greys[/u].

Aha! I was hoping more people would choose Zoan types that weren't mythical. This class of devil fruits is too overshadowed and underrated. And from among them, you choosing a frog really took me by surprise. I can't wait to see how you expand upon this one.

[Archived Claims] [2020-09-02] Devil Fruit Claims - Page 4 Fdzj9w
Anonymous
Guest
Guest

[Archived Claims] [2020-09-02] Devil Fruit Claims - Page 4 Empty Re: [Archived Claims] [2020-09-02] Devil Fruit Claims

This post has in-line assessment comments.Thu Oct 20, 2016 6:25 pm
Character Name: Mazin Botros
Devil Fruit Name: Zabun Zabun No Mi -- Splash Splash Fruit
Type: Paramecia
Description: Allows the user to generate and manipulate water from their own body, provided said water meets two conditions. The first is that he may only manipulate the water he creates while it is within its liquid state.  The second is that either the creation or manipulation of water must be accompanied by some sort of body movement. As such, due to the nature of its creation this water counts as "moving water" against Devil Fruit users, akin rain or waves, and does not activate their users' standard weakness to water. By extension, natural "standing" water is still a weakness for this user.

The fruit itself is named for one of the sound effects for loud / big splashing, making those who eat it a Splash Man, with a strange quirk of increased thirst in its user.


Code:

[b]Zabun Zabun No Mi (Splash Splash Fruit)[/b] belongs to [u]Mazin[/u].
Gray
Gray
The Conqueror / Black Fist
[tracker=/t131-tracker-gray-starks#504]
Name : Gray
Epithet : "The Conqueror"; "Black Fist"
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" (310 cm)
Weight : 1043 lbs (473 kg)
Species : Cyborg Human
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Lurking Legend (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Role : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Bounty : [ber=r] 5,000,000,000
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.20
Shop Discount : -30%
Balance : [bel] 25,000,000,000
[[strollingdeath]][[baneoftheweak]][[riseandshine]][[childofdestiny]][[freakofnature]]
[[punchoutguru]][[dulcetvirtuoso]]

[[improviseadaptovercome]]
Posts : 3907

[Archived Claims] [2020-09-02] Devil Fruit Claims - Page 4 Empty Re: [Archived Claims] [2020-09-02] Devil Fruit Claims

This post has in-line assessment comments.Thu Oct 20, 2016 6:36 pm
Mazin wrote:Character Name: Mazin Botros
Devil Fruit Name: Zabun Zabun No Mi -- Splash Splash Fruit
Type: Paramecia
Description: Allows the user to generate and manipulate water from their own body, provided said water meets two conditions. The first is that he may only manipulate the water he creates while it is within its liquid state.  The second is that either the creation or manipulation of water must be accompanied by some sort of body movement. As such, due to the nature of its creation this water counts as "moving water" against Devil Fruit users, akin rain or waves, and does not activate their users' standard weakness to water. By extension, natural "standing" water is still a weakness for this user.

The fruit itself is named for one of the sound effects for loud / big splashing, making those who eat it a Splash Man, with a strange quirk of increased thirst in its user.


Code:

[b]Zabun Zabun No Mi (Splash Splash Fruit)[/b] belongs to [u]Mazin[/u].

I'm hard pressed to approve this devil fruit, for despite you having worded it really well, and having mentioned the fact that devil fruit users are only affected by what Oda refers to as "standing" water, not much is still known of what exactly it is about water besides the arbitrary "power of the sea" that restricts devil fruit powers. If there is an alternate fruit that you have an idea for, I would really recommend posting that idea.

That being said, if you truly don't have any other ideas that you can work with, I'm willing to approve this fruit if you agree to three restrictions.
1. The water that you create may not be used as other devil fruit users' standard weakness. Therefore, even when you get to a power level where you are able to submerge your opponents in the water that you generated, they should still be able to freely use their powers.
2. Because you are a water-human in a manner of speaking, though not Logia, you should not be able to breathe underwater thanks to this power.
3. Due to the controversial nature of water-based devil fruits, I would still be required to monitor your fruit in action on occasion and police it if necessary. So, you would have to be prepared for that.
Anonymous
Guest
Guest

[Archived Claims] [2020-09-02] Devil Fruit Claims - Page 4 Empty Re: [Archived Claims] [2020-09-02] Devil Fruit Claims

This post has in-line assessment comments.Thu Oct 20, 2016 7:32 pm
Gray wrote:
Mazin wrote:Character Name: Mazin Botros
Devil Fruit Name: Zabun Zabun No Mi -- Splash Splash Fruit
Type: Paramecia
Description: Allows the user to generate and manipulate water from their own body, provided said water meets two conditions. The first is that he may only manipulate the water he creates while it is within its liquid state.  The second is that either the creation or manipulation of water must be accompanied by some sort of body movement. As such, due to the nature of its creation this water counts as "moving water" against Devil Fruit users, akin rain or waves, and does not activate their users' standard weakness to water. By extension, natural "standing" water is still a weakness for this user.

The fruit itself is named for one of the sound effects for loud / big splashing, making those who eat it a Splash Man, with a strange quirk of increased thirst in its user.


Code:

[b]Zabun Zabun No Mi (Splash Splash Fruit)[/b] belongs to [u]Mazin[/u].

I'm hard pressed to approve this devil fruit, for despite you having worded it really well, and having mentioned the fact that devil fruit users are only affected by what Oda refers to as "standing" water, not much is still known of what exactly it is about water besides the arbitrary "power of the sea" that restricts devil fruit powers. If there is an alternate fruit that you have an idea for, I would really recommend posting that idea.

That being said, if you truly don't have any other ideas that you can work with, I'm willing to approve this fruit if you agree to three restrictions.
1. The water that you create may not be used as other devil fruit users' standard weakness. Therefore, even when you get to a power level where you are able to submerge your opponents in the water that you generated, they should still be able to freely use their powers.
2. Because you are a water-human in a manner of speaking, though not Logia, you should not be able to breathe underwater thanks to this power.
3. Due to the controversial nature of water-based devil fruits, I would still be required to monitor your fruit in action on occasion and police it if necessary. So, you would have to be prepared for that.

Hmm.  The restrictions would be fine, but I've got plenty I'd be happy to go with that saves concern. lol  Lots of fun stuff even in canon that One Piece hasn't had the opportunity to fully show some utility for, such as...

Character Name: Mazin Botros
Devil Fruit Name: Kilo Kilo No Mi -- Kilo Kilo Fruit
Type: Paramecia
Description: The Kilo Kilo no Mi is a Paramecia-type Devil Fruit that allows the user to change their weight from 1 to 10,000 kilograms without affecting the his or her mass / overall size, instead changing the force of gravity upon the user's body. The user, however, is unaffected by the gravitational force itself, capable of moving normally.

Code:

[b]Kilo Kilo No Mi (Kilo Kilo Fruit)[/b] belongs to [u]Mazin[/u].
Gray
Gray
The Conqueror / Black Fist
[tracker=/t131-tracker-gray-starks#504]
Name : Gray
Epithet : "The Conqueror"; "Black Fist"
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" (310 cm)
Weight : 1043 lbs (473 kg)
Species : Cyborg Human
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Lurking Legend (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Role : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Bounty : [ber=r] 5,000,000,000
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.20
Shop Discount : -30%
Balance : [bel] 25,000,000,000
[[strollingdeath]][[baneoftheweak]][[riseandshine]][[childofdestiny]][[freakofnature]]
[[punchoutguru]][[dulcetvirtuoso]]

[[improviseadaptovercome]]
Posts : 3907

[Archived Claims] [2020-09-02] Devil Fruit Claims - Page 4 Empty Re: [Archived Claims] [2020-09-02] Devil Fruit Claims

This post has in-line assessment comments.Thu Oct 20, 2016 7:49 pm
Mazin wrote:
Gray wrote:
Mazin wrote:Character Name: Mazin Botros
Devil Fruit Name: Zabun Zabun No Mi -- Splash Splash Fruit
Type: Paramecia
Description: Allows the user to generate and manipulate water from their own body, provided said water meets two conditions. The first is that he may only manipulate the water he creates while it is within its liquid state.  The second is that either the creation or manipulation of water must be accompanied by some sort of body movement. As such, due to the nature of its creation this water counts as "moving water" against Devil Fruit users, akin rain or waves, and does not activate their users' standard weakness to water. By extension, natural "standing" water is still a weakness for this user.

The fruit itself is named for one of the sound effects for loud / big splashing, making those who eat it a Splash Man, with a strange quirk of increased thirst in its user.


Code:

[b]Zabun Zabun No Mi (Splash Splash Fruit)[/b] belongs to [u]Mazin[/u].

I'm hard pressed to approve this devil fruit, for despite you having worded it really well, and having mentioned the fact that devil fruit users are only affected by what Oda refers to as "standing" water, not much is still known of what exactly it is about water besides the arbitrary "power of the sea" that restricts devil fruit powers. If there is an alternate fruit that you have an idea for, I would really recommend posting that idea.

That being said, if you truly don't have any other ideas that you can work with, I'm willing to approve this fruit if you agree to three restrictions.
1. The water that you create may not be used as other devil fruit users' standard weakness. Therefore, even when you get to a power level where you are able to submerge your opponents in the water that you generated, they should still be able to freely use their powers.
2. Because you are a water-human in a manner of speaking, though not Logia, you should not be able to breathe underwater thanks to this power.
3. Due to the controversial nature of water-based devil fruits, I would still be required to monitor your fruit in action on occasion and police it if necessary. So, you would have to be prepared for that.

Hmm.  The restrictions would be fine, but I've got plenty I'd be happy to go with that saves concern. lol  Lots of fun stuff even in canon that One Piece hasn't had the opportunity to fully show some utility for, such as...

Character Name: Mazin Botros
Devil Fruit Name: Kilo Kilo No Mi -- Kilo Kilo Fruit
Type: Paramecia
Description: The Kilo Kilo no Mi is a Paramecia-type Devil Fruit that allows the user to change their weight from 1 to 10,000 kilograms without affecting the his or her mass / overall size, instead changing the force of gravity upon the user's body. The user, however, is unaffected by the gravitational force itself, capable of moving normally.

Code:

[b]Kilo Kilo No Mi (Kilo Kilo Fruit)[/b] belongs to [u]Mazin[/u].

Aha, now there's a fruit that I can wholeheartedly approve and look forward to.

[Archived Claims] [2020-09-02] Devil Fruit Claims - Page 4 Fdzj9w
Anonymous
Guest
Guest

[Archived Claims] [2020-09-02] Devil Fruit Claims - Page 4 Empty Re: [Archived Claims] [2020-09-02] Devil Fruit Claims

This post has in-line assessment comments.Fri Nov 04, 2016 7:21 am
Character Name: Laurel O’Halloran
Devil Fruit Name: Inu Inu no Mi (Dog-Dog Fruit), Model: Bake-Danuki
Type: Mythical Zoan
Description: The user gains the ability to transform into a Bake-Danuki (“Monster Tanuki”) or assume a human-hybrid form, in addition to acquiring its powers. These powers include transforming leaves into other objects (such as gold coins or paper money) or powerless constructs resembling other people, with approximately as much physical strength as an average adult human civilian (up to one at a time); shapeshifting oneself, either wholly or partially, into an object, another person, or even structures or vehicles (however, transforming into a boat would not remove the weakness to water), with an upper size limit of about 10 meters in height and length, albeit with a pair of tanuki ears and a tail invariably remaining as “defects” to the disguise; acoustic mimicry; and, lastly, enabling inanimate objects within perceptible range to move on their own and receive commands (though they lack a soul or sentience, returning to normal as soon as influence over them is lost). The use of leaves is required for all of these powers, and more elaborate transformations of the user or other objects requires more leaves and energy taken from the user. Any transformations, while having substance, do not alter the user’s or object’s attributes, such as strength or durability.

Code:
[b]Inu Inu no Mi (Dog-Dog Fruit), Model: Bake-Danuki[/b] belongs to [u]Laurel O’Halloran[/u].
Gray
Gray
The Conqueror / Black Fist
[tracker=/t131-tracker-gray-starks#504]
Name : Gray
Epithet : "The Conqueror"; "Black Fist"
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" (310 cm)
Weight : 1043 lbs (473 kg)
Species : Cyborg Human
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Lurking Legend (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Role : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Bounty : [ber=r] 5,000,000,000
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.20
Shop Discount : -30%
Balance : [bel] 25,000,000,000
[[strollingdeath]][[baneoftheweak]][[riseandshine]][[childofdestiny]][[freakofnature]]
[[punchoutguru]][[dulcetvirtuoso]]

[[improviseadaptovercome]]
Posts : 3907

[Archived Claims] [2020-09-02] Devil Fruit Claims - Page 4 Empty Re: [Archived Claims] [2020-09-02] Devil Fruit Claims

This post has in-line assessment comments.Fri Nov 04, 2016 2:45 pm
Laurel O’Halloran wrote:Character Name: Laurel O’Halloran
Devil Fruit Name: Inu Inu no Mi (Dog-Dog Fruit), Model: Bake-Danuki
Type: Mythical Zoan
Description: The user gains the ability to transform into a Bake-Danuki (“Monster Tanuki”) or assume a human-hybrid form, in addition to acquiring its powers. These powers include transforming leaves into other objects (such as gold coins or paper money) or powerless constructs resembling other people, with approximately as much physical strength as an average adult human civilian (up to one at a time); shapeshifting oneself, either wholly or partially, into an object, another person, or even structures or vehicles (however, transforming into a boat would not remove the weakness to water), with an upper size limit of about 10 meters in height and length, albeit with a pair of tanuki ears and a tail invariably remaining as “defects” to the disguise; acoustic mimicry; and, lastly, enabling inanimate objects within perceptible range to move on their own and receive commands (though they lack a soul or sentience, returning to normal as soon as influence over them is lost). The use of leaves is required for all of these powers, and more elaborate transformations of the user or other objects requires more leaves and energy taken from the user. Any transformations, while having substance, do not alter the user’s or object’s attributes, such as strength or durability.

Code:
[b]Inu Inu no Mi (Dog-Dog Fruit), Model: Bake-Danuki[/b] belongs to [u]Laurel O’Halloran[/u].

"Moderation in all things", I believe is how the phrase goes. But, then again, there's also the phrase "Moderation in all things, especially moderation"; in light of which, I imagine I might fail to practice what I preach.

To put simply, the powers you are requesting to be combined into one are simply too many for a single devil fruit to bestow. It would be entirely unfair to others if you (despite having a Mythical Zoan) were to have such an impossibly versatile devil fruit, in comparison to those who would receive only a fraction of even one of these powers through traditional devil fruits.

Although I understand that the way you designed it is similar to how powerful the devil fruit is portrayed in the game, and is in fact mostly true to the mythical creature's lore, the analogy I would use in this case is Whitebeard's Gura Gura no Mi. Just because Whitebeard is able to practically destroy the world with his devil fruit in canon, doesn't mean it could also be allowed for players in an RP environment.

I do realize that subjecting Bake-danuki to such restrictions would pretty much leave it powerless, in which case you should see if there isn't another Mythical Zoan you are interested in.
Anonymous
Guest
Guest

[Archived Claims] [2020-09-02] Devil Fruit Claims - Page 4 Empty Re: [Archived Claims] [2020-09-02] Devil Fruit Claims

This post has in-line assessment comments.Fri Nov 04, 2016 5:18 pm
After discussing things with Gray, here is the revised Bake-Danuki:

Character Name: Laurel O’Halloran
Devil Fruit Name: Inu Inu no Mi (Dog-Dog Fruit), Model: Bake-Danuki
Type: Mythical Zoan
Description: The user gains the ability to transform into a Bake-Danuki (“Monster Tanuki”) or assume a human-hybrid form, in addition to acquiring its powers. These powers include transforming leaves into money for as long as they stay within the user’s presence, or the user shapeshifting to resemble other people, creatures, or inanimate objects, equal to or less than the user’s own size and weight, albeit with a pair of tanuki ears and a tail invariably present as a “defect” to the disguise. When transforming into an otherwise immobile object, it is possible to use the tail to move the user around their environment.

Code:
[b]Inu Inu no Mi (Dog-Dog Fruit), Model: Bake-Danuki[/b] belongs to [u]Laurel O’Halloran[/u].
Gray
Gray
The Conqueror / Black Fist
[tracker=/t131-tracker-gray-starks#504]
Name : Gray
Epithet : "The Conqueror"; "Black Fist"
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" (310 cm)
Weight : 1043 lbs (473 kg)
Species : Cyborg Human
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Lurking Legend (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Role : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Bounty : [ber=r] 5,000,000,000
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.20
Shop Discount : -30%
Balance : [bel] 25,000,000,000
[[strollingdeath]][[baneoftheweak]][[riseandshine]][[childofdestiny]][[freakofnature]]
[[punchoutguru]][[dulcetvirtuoso]]

[[improviseadaptovercome]]
Posts : 3907

[Archived Claims] [2020-09-02] Devil Fruit Claims - Page 4 Empty Re: [Archived Claims] [2020-09-02] Devil Fruit Claims

This post has in-line assessment comments.Fri Nov 04, 2016 5:19 pm
Laurel O’Halloran wrote:After discussing things with Gray, here is the revised Bake-Danuki:

Character Name: Laurel O’Halloran
Devil Fruit Name: Inu Inu no Mi (Dog-Dog Fruit), Model: Bake-Danuki
Type: Mythical Zoan
Description: The user gains the ability to transform into a Bake-Danuki (“Monster Tanuki”) or assume a human-hybrid form, in addition to acquiring its powers. These powers include transforming leaves into money for as long as they stay within the user’s presence, or the user shapeshifting to resemble other people, creatures, or inanimate objects, equal to or less than the user’s own size and weight, albeit with a pair of tanuki ears and a tail invariably present as a “defect” to the disguise. When transforming into an otherwise immobile object, it is possible to use the tail to move the user around their environment.

Code:
[b]Inu Inu no Mi (Dog-Dog Fruit), Model: Bake-Danuki[/b] belongs to [u]Laurel O’Halloran[/u].

Approved! You may begin working on your fighting style~
Anonymous
Guest
Guest

[Archived Claims] [2020-09-02] Devil Fruit Claims - Page 4 Empty Re: [Archived Claims] [2020-09-02] Devil Fruit Claims

This post has in-line assessment comments.Sun Nov 27, 2016 4:13 pm
Character Name: Eva
Devil Fruit Name: Ito Ito no Mi (String-String Fruit)
Type: Paramecia
Description: allows the user to create and manipulate strings, making the user a String Human
Code:

[b]Ito Ito no Mi (String-String Fruit)[/b] belongs to [u]Eva[/u].
Gray
Gray
The Conqueror / Black Fist
[tracker=/t131-tracker-gray-starks#504]
Name : Gray
Epithet : "The Conqueror"; "Black Fist"
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" (310 cm)
Weight : 1043 lbs (473 kg)
Species : Cyborg Human
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Lurking Legend (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Role : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Bounty : [ber=r] 5,000,000,000
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.20
Shop Discount : -30%
Balance : [bel] 25,000,000,000
[[strollingdeath]][[baneoftheweak]][[riseandshine]][[childofdestiny]][[freakofnature]]
[[punchoutguru]][[dulcetvirtuoso]]

[[improviseadaptovercome]]
Posts : 3907

[Archived Claims] [2020-09-02] Devil Fruit Claims - Page 4 Empty Re: [Archived Claims] [2020-09-02] Devil Fruit Claims

This post has in-line assessment comments.Sun Nov 27, 2016 4:21 pm
Eva wrote:Character Name: Eva
Devil Fruit Name: Ito Ito no Mi (String-String Fruit)
Type: Paramecia
Description: allows the user to create and manipulate strings, making the user a String Human
Code:

[b]Ito Ito no Mi (String-String Fruit)[/b] belongs to [u]Eva[/u].

God Thread!
[Archived Claims] [2020-09-02] Devil Fruit Claims - Page 4 Fdzj9w
Anonymous
Guest
Guest

[Archived Claims] [2020-09-02] Devil Fruit Claims - Page 4 Empty Re: [Archived Claims] [2020-09-02] Devil Fruit Claims

This post has in-line assessment comments.Thu Dec 08, 2016 3:01 pm
Character Name: Roland Gates
Devil Fruit Name: Nuke Nuke no Mi (Escape Escape Fruit)
Type: Paramecia
Description: The main strength of this fruit's power is to allow the user to phase through solid objects, allowing for an easier and more unconventional way to get around, as well as avoiding attacks from just about any weapon and projectile but unable to phase through bodies of water, Seastone armaments nor Haki-reinforced attacks/weaponry. The user can also share their intangibility with whatever and whoever they touch, allowing people or objects to phase through solid matter along wih him, or making the ground intangible to make people fall through the floor, though it would take the Devil Fruit to Awaken at Tier 5 before the user could render larger objects and people in general intangible, whilst smaller objects can be made intangible before awakening assuming he's carrying it on his person. In general it can be said that the user is unable to render anything save himself, his clothes, small objects and cherished equipment intangible, or at least until the fruit's true power awakens.
Code:

[b]Nuke Nuke no Mi (Escape Escape Fruit)[/b] belongs to [u]Roland Gates[/u].
Gray
Gray
The Conqueror / Black Fist
[tracker=/t131-tracker-gray-starks#504]
Name : Gray
Epithet : "The Conqueror"; "Black Fist"
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" (310 cm)
Weight : 1043 lbs (473 kg)
Species : Cyborg Human
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Lurking Legend (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Role : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Bounty : [ber=r] 5,000,000,000
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.20
Shop Discount : -30%
Balance : [bel] 25,000,000,000
[[strollingdeath]][[baneoftheweak]][[riseandshine]][[childofdestiny]][[freakofnature]]
[[punchoutguru]][[dulcetvirtuoso]]

[[improviseadaptovercome]]
Posts : 3907

[Archived Claims] [2020-09-02] Devil Fruit Claims - Page 4 Empty Re: [Archived Claims] [2020-09-02] Devil Fruit Claims

This post has in-line assessment comments.Thu Dec 08, 2016 3:05 pm
Roland Gates wrote:Character Name: Roland Gates
Devil Fruit Name: Nuke Nuke no Mi (Escape Escape Fruit)
Type: Paramecia
Description: The main strength of this fruit's power is to allow the user to phase through solid objects, allowing for an easier and more unconventional way to get around, as well as avoiding attacks from just about any weapon and projectile but unable to phase through bodies of water, Seastone armaments nor Haki-reinforced attacks/weaponry. The user can also share their intangibility with whatever and whoever they touch, allowing people or objects to phase through solid matter along wih him, or making the ground intangible to make people fall through the floor, though it would take the Devil Fruit to Awaken at Tier 5 before the user could render larger objects and people in general intangible, whilst smaller objects can be made intangible before awakening assuming he's carrying it on his person. In general it can be said that the user is unable to render anything save himself, his clothes, small objects and cherished equipment intangible, or at least until the fruit's true power awakens.
Code:

[b]Nuke Nuke no Mi (Escape Escape Fruit)[/b] belongs to [u]Roland Gates[/u].

Worded it very well!

[Archived Claims] [2020-09-02] Devil Fruit Claims - Page 4 Fdzj9w
Anonymous
Guest
Guest

[Archived Claims] [2020-09-02] Devil Fruit Claims - Page 4 Empty Re: [Archived Claims] [2020-09-02] Devil Fruit Claims

This post has in-line assessment comments.Mon Dec 12, 2016 4:40 pm
Character Name: Quentin Quint
Devil Fruit Name: Inu-Inu no Mi, Model: White Wolf
Type: Zoan
Description: The Inu-Inu no Mi, Model: White Wolf lets it's user take on the shape and characteristics of a white wolf. The full-wolf form is bigger, stronger and more ferocius looking than a normal white wolf.
Code:

[b]Inu-Inu no Mi, Model: White Wolf (Dog-Dog Fruit, Model: White Wolf)[/b] belongs to [u]Quentin Quint[/u].


Last edited by Quentin Quint on Mon Dec 12, 2016 4:53 pm; edited 1 time in total
Gray
Gray
The Conqueror / Black Fist
[tracker=/t131-tracker-gray-starks#504]
Name : Gray
Epithet : "The Conqueror"; "Black Fist"
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" (310 cm)
Weight : 1043 lbs (473 kg)
Species : Cyborg Human
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Lurking Legend (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Role : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Bounty : [ber=r] 5,000,000,000
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.20
Shop Discount : -30%
Balance : [bel] 25,000,000,000
[[strollingdeath]][[baneoftheweak]][[riseandshine]][[childofdestiny]][[freakofnature]]
[[punchoutguru]][[dulcetvirtuoso]]

[[improviseadaptovercome]]
Posts : 3907

[Archived Claims] [2020-09-02] Devil Fruit Claims - Page 4 Empty Re: [Archived Claims] [2020-09-02] Devil Fruit Claims

This post has in-line assessment comments.Mon Dec 12, 2016 4:47 pm
Quentin Quint wrote:Character Name: Quentin Quint
Devil Fruit Name: Inu-Inu no Mi, Model: White Wolf
Type: Zoan
Description: The Inu-Inu no Mi, Model: White Wolf lets it's user take on the shape and characteristics of a white wolf.
Code:

[b]Inu-Inu no Mi, Model: White Wolf (Dog-Dog Fruit, Model: White Wolf)[/b] belongs to [u]Quentin Quint[/u].

I would add just a bit more detail to the description, Quentin, where you describe the abilities and strengths you'd possess as a white wolf. The main point you may want to add, is that you'd be a lot stronger than the average white wolf (and perhaps bigger?).
Anonymous
Guest
Guest

[Archived Claims] [2020-09-02] Devil Fruit Claims - Page 4 Empty Re: [Archived Claims] [2020-09-02] Devil Fruit Claims

This post has in-line assessment comments.Mon Dec 12, 2016 4:55 pm
Gray wrote:
Quentin Quint wrote:Character Name: Quentin Quint
Devil Fruit Name: Inu-Inu no Mi, Model: White Wolf
Type: Zoan
Description: The Inu-Inu no Mi, Model: White Wolf lets it's user take on the shape and characteristics of a white wolf.
Code:

[b]Inu-Inu no Mi, Model: White Wolf (Dog-Dog Fruit, Model: White Wolf)[/b] belongs to [u]Quentin Quint[/u].

I would add just a bit more detail to the description, Quentin, where you describe the abilities and strengths you'd possess as a white wolf. The main point you may want to add, is that you'd be a lot stronger than the average white wolf (and perhaps bigger?).

Edited the fruit description.
Back to top
Permissions in this forum:
You cannot reply to topics in this forum
Join Revival Dawn on Discord