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This post has assessment comments.Thu Jul 16, 2020 5:23 pm

Shale Neon Habit


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Basic Character Information


Starting Bonus: Child of Destiny | [Starting Bonus Roll]

First Name: Shale
Middle Name/Initial: Neon
Last Name: Habit
Epithet:
Age: 24
Gender: Male
Race: Human
Faction: Marine
Profession: General Practitioner, Surgeon


Physical Appearance


Height: 11ft
Weight: 497lbs

Hair Style: Long, straight, barely brushed
Hair Color: Dark Brown
Eye Color: Blue
Scars: Surgery scar above the navel
Clothing and Accessories: Shale wears simple, light clothing: Short sleeved T-shirts, each with a random number on it, and pairs of trousers each with a random letter embellished on the right knee. The look is finished by normal black loafers on his feet (Worn without socks).
Description: Tall, lanky, with the left arm just barely longer than the right. No hair to be spotted outside the head and armpits. Fingernails are long but maintained rather well.


The Past


Main Traits: Cheery, Hard to Understand, Loves all life
Likes: Numbers, Letters, Interestingly colored candy
Dislikes: Monocolored candy
Unique laugh: Uheeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeehehehe

Hometown: Spider Miles
Personality: A lover of all life, sapient or otherwise, Shale is often the first to refuse any options that involve death, whether for himself or anyone else. Being somewhat awkward, he tends to phrase things in ways that make them hard to understand for other people, even if the notion he's attempting to express is rather normal.


Not the bravest boy on the seas, Shale's first priority in a fight is his own survival along with the survival of others, victory comes second.
History:
Castor O. Nox
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[tracker=/t980-castor-o-nox#4771]
Name : Castor O. Nox
Epithet : Sanpaku | The Azure Pheasant | Duke Of Lvneel
Age : 25
Height : 5'9"
Weight : 175lbs
Species : Three-Eye Tribesman
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Blockbuster
Alliance : Nox Prime
Crew : Nox Pirates
Ship : The Wailing Calamity
Crew Role : Captain | Navigator | Book Collector | Pride Sin
Devil Fruit : Goro Goro no Mi
Haki Level : 9
[[busospec]]
Hitpoints (HP) : 525
Attack (ATK) : 495
Defense (DEF) : 450
Reflex (RX) : 560
Willpower (WP) : 500
Level : 80
Experience Points : 8000
Bounty : [ber=r] 500,000,000
Quality Score : S
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (To all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.17 (Turf) +0.10 (Blockbuster)
Shop Discount : -20%
Berries : [ber] 150,000,000
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[[bookworm]][[untouchable]][[childofdestiny]]
[[punchoutguru]][[berryprinter]]
[[atkt6_sp]][[deft6]][[deft6]][[rxt6]]
[[ancientzoan]]
Turf : [turf="/t296-turf-details-lvneel#1110"]Lvneel[/turf]
Posts : 745
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Shale Neon Habit Empty Re: Shale Neon Habit

This post has assessment comments.Sun Jul 19, 2020 10:27 pm
Habit wrote:

Shale Neon Habit


Shale Neon Habit 5IbzOgN

Basic Character Information


Starting Bonus: Child of Destiny | [Starting Bonus Roll]

First Name: Shale
Middle Name/Initial: Neon
Last Name: Habit
Epithet:
Age: 24
Gender: Male
Race: Human
Faction: Marine
Profession: General Practitioner, Surgeon


Physical Appearance


Height: 11ft
Weight: 497lbs

Hair Style: Long, straight, barely brushed
Hair Color: Dark Brown
Eye Color: Blue
Scars: Surgery scar above the navel
Clothing and Accessories: Shale wears simple, light clothing: Short sleeved T-shirts, each with a random number on it, and pairs of trousers each with a random letter embellished on the right knee. The look is finished by normal black loafers on his feet (Worn without socks).
Description: Tall, lanky, with the left arm just barely longer than the right. No hair to be spotted outside the head and armpits. Fingernails are long but maintained rather well.


The Past


Main Traits: Cheery, Hard to Understand, Loves all life
Likes: Numbers, Letters, Interestingly colored candy
Dislikes: Monocolored candy
Unique laugh: Uheeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeehehehe

Hometown: Spider Miles
Personality: A lover of all life, sapient or otherwise, Shale is often the first to refuse any options that involve death, whether for himself or anyone else. Being somewhat awkward, he tends to phrase things in ways that make them hard to understand for other people, even if the notion he's attempting to express is rather normal.


Not the bravest boy on the seas, Shale's first priority in a fight is his own survival along with the survival of others, victory comes second.
History:

Heya Habit! Welcome to Revival Dawn officially! I'll be your evaluator for this thread, I just have a few things I would like fleshed out just a tad bit more.

Personality: For someone who survived something as traumatic as a wide spread disease at a such a young age, it'd like to hear more about how Shale faced adversity moving passed this incident, how it affected the personality to day who ended venturing to even practice in the medical field. Doesn't have to long winded, just a bit more incite to how he is in combat situations, and in regular life. Does he have any weird quirks or interests, outstanding personality traits, just something that'd give your future RP partners more flesh to go off of.

History: Nothing really stood out too too alarming to me here but it'd like a bit more to how he'd decided to defect to the marines, even after being inspired by a pirate in his youth? What made him drift that way? How did he make it to Minion Island from Spider Miles, just add more depth to the world, even if your saving the good stuff for in actual RP threads and story-lines. After that, you'll be ready to go!

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