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The Conqueror / Black Fist
[tracker=/t131-tracker-gray-starks#504]
Name : Gray
Epithet : "The Conqueror" / "Black Fist"
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" (310 cm)
Weight : 1043 lbs (473 kg)
Species : Cyborg Human
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Lurking Legend (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Role : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Bounty : [ber=r] 5,000,000,000
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.20
Shop Discount : -30%
Balance : [bel] 25,000,000,000
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This post has in-line assessment comments.Fri Dec 29, 2023 6:32 pm
Sunny wrote:Character Name: Sunny Daes
Devil Fruit Name: Wapu Wapu no Mi - The Warp Warp Fruit
Type: Paramecia
Description: This fruit gives the user the ability to warp/teleport both themselves and others around instantaniously. In order to complete these warps the destination or target must be within line of sight, visible to the user, or an extremely well known location (this can include empty air). The range of this ability extends out in a sphere from the user with a maximum of 10 miles in diameter. There is a minimum cooldown of five seconds between warps. Teleporting oneself imposes only trivial stamina drain, but teleporting others is exponentially more energy intensive.

Side Note: This fruit has yet to be fully expanded on in canon, i've tried to give it some limitations to be less OP, but am also open to any changes mods or admins may want to impose on it's abilities.

Code:

[b]Wapu Wapu no Mi (Warp Warp Fruit)[/b] belongs to [url=https://www.revivaldawn.com/u673#]Sunny Daes[/url].

[approve]Approved, but at lower tiers, the maximum range of this warp ability would likely be much lower. At the same time, at the highest tiers, his maximum range would be much greater.[/approve]

Maynard
Maynard
[tracker=/f47-personal-tracker]
Name : Charles C. Maynard
Epithet : Red Beard
Age : 59
Height : 20ft 4in
Weight : 700lbs
Species : Human/Giant
Faction : Revolutionaries
Balance : [bel] 50,000
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This post has in-line assessment comments.Sun Dec 31, 2023 7:06 am
Character Name: Charles C. Maynard
Devil Fruit Name: Atsu Atsu no Mi (Hot-Hot Fruit)
Type: Paramecia
Description: The Atsu Atsu no Mi is Paramecia-type Devil Fruit that gives the user the ability to produce and control vast amounts of heat, making them a 10,000 Degree Human. its user gains the ability to produce and control an immense amount of body heat. This also has the added side-effect of causing steam to emanate from their body. The Devil Fruit user can use this heat to melt anything they touch. The user is also able to use it to either protect themselves from physical blows by creating a scorching hot layer of heat around their body or attack opponents with various heat based attacks. Because the user has the ability to regulate their body temperature, they are able to withstand varying temperatures of extreme magnitude.

In battle, the user is able to use the fruit's powers in various ways. The most basic of these ways are heating up their body in order to either melt things in their grasp or to protect themself from physical blows. Other techniques involve using the fruit's power of producing heat in varying degrees. These include making balls of heat that can be thrown at an opponent and even using the steam that is produced from the intense heat reacting with air or water.
Code:

[b]Atsu Atsu no Mi (Hot-Hot Fruit)[/b] belongs to [url=https://www.revivaldawn.com/f47-personal-tracker]Charles C. Maynard[/url].
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Gray
The Conqueror / Black Fist
[tracker=/t131-tracker-gray-starks#504]
Name : Gray
Epithet : "The Conqueror" / "Black Fist"
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" (310 cm)
Weight : 1043 lbs (473 kg)
Species : Cyborg Human
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Lurking Legend (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Role : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Bounty : [ber=r] 5,000,000,000
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.20
Shop Discount : -30%
Balance : [bel] 25,000,000,000
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This post has in-line assessment comments.Sun Dec 31, 2023 1:38 pm
Maynard wrote:Character Name: Charles C. Maynard
Devil Fruit Name: Atsu Atsu no Mi (Hot-Hot Fruit)
Type: Paramecia
Description: The Atsu Atsu no Mi is Paramecia-type Devil Fruit that gives the user the ability to produce and control vast amounts of heat, making them a 10,000 Degree Human. its user gains the ability to produce and control an immense amount of body heat. This also has the added side-effect of causing steam to emanate from their body. The Devil Fruit user can use this heat to melt anything they touch. The user is also able to use it to either protect themselves from physical blows by creating a scorching hot layer of heat around their body or attack opponents with various heat based attacks. Because the user has the ability to regulate their body temperature, they are able to withstand varying temperatures of extreme magnitude.

In battle, the user is able to use the fruit's powers in various ways. The most basic of these ways are heating up their body in order to either melt things in their grasp or to protect themself from physical blows. Other techniques involve using the fruit's power of producing heat in varying degrees. These include making balls of heat that can be thrown at an opponent and even using the steam that is produced from the intense heat reacting with air or water.
Code:

[b]Atsu Atsu no Mi (Hot-Hot Fruit)[/b] belongs to [url=https://www.revivaldawn.com/f47-personal-tracker]Charles C. Maynard[/url].

[approve]BUT, with a caveat. Your fruit will be the Netsu Netsu no Mi (Heat-Heat Fruit). Its current user is going to get purged today so I'm okay with the claim going to you instead. Atsu Atsu was a non-canon fruit that came before Netsu Netsu was revealed, so I don't allow Atsu Atsu no Mi as a separate fruit anymore. Also, you made an error once again in linking your user profile. Your user profile can be accessed by clicking your username in one of your posts.[/approve]


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Doji
Doji
[tracker=/t2417-asakura-doji#14975]
Name : Asakura Doji
Epithet : Grave Danger
Age : 18
Height : 17'7
Weight : 1,777 lb
Species : Human-Giant-Oni Crossbred
Faction : Pirates
Crew : The Yokai Pirates
Ship : Gashadokuro, the Walking Castle
Crew Role : Captain | Blind Navigator
Bounty : [bel=r] 177,777,001
Quality Score : S
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (To all allies)
Shop Discount : 10%
Balance : [bel] 196,745,669
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This post has in-line assessment comments.Wed Jan 03, 2024 3:39 pm
Character Name: Asakura Doji
Devil Fruit Name: Ushi Ushi no Mi Model - Kirin (Ox-Ox Fruit Model- Kirin)
Type: Mythical Zoan
Description:
The Ushi Ushi no Mi Model - Kirin takes the form of a jade-ish blue pomegranate with a mane of golden fur surrounding its 7-pronged stem. Its skin is marred by the normal swirls of a devil fruit as well as a snake-scale texture that covers sections of the fruit's surface.

The fruit grants its user the ability to transform into a Kirin-hybrid and allows users who are good of heart (unlike Doji, who cannot currently make use of his fruit's full form) to transform into a full Kirin. The powers of the Kirin are as follows:
  • Serene Presence-The presence of the Kirin inspires tranquility in those around it, calming those fearful and angry in its presence. The presence of the user's Hybrid form exclusively affects willing allies, common animals, and weak-willed humanoids.
  • Providence- The Kirin's heartbeat is imbued with healing powers that allow the fruit's user to repair damage dealt to living things around them (including themselves). Those around the Kirin can tell when this ability is used, as they will hear the beat of the fruit-user's heart echo in their skull.
  • Horn of Higher Calling- The Kirin has a single antler that sprouts from the left side of its skull, this horn is borderline unbreakable and courses with gleaming golden energy. In "head-to-head" conflicts the kirin has a devastating weapon.
  • Flames of Judgment- The Kirin's flames of judgment appear as black-and-white flickering fires that sprout from the fruit user's wrists and ankles (in hybrid form). The user can employ these flames by coating their melee attacks, causing nearby enemies to burn from within, or by breathing the flames of judgment as a breath weapon. When used as a breath weapon, the volume of flames that the user can breathe is enormous. The flames do not burn what they devour from the outside in, but rather from the inside out. Though they do require oxygen to burn, they are extremely difficult to smother out and the flames of judgment’s intensity is proportional to the wickedness of what they are burning; they would simply dissipate if wreathed around an innocent child, they would only mildly burn a generally morally upstanding but flawed person, they would harshly burn a common criminal, and they would viciously incinerate a wanton murderer, tyrant, or war criminal.
  • Pass Without Trace- An effect of this Devil Fruit that persists even into the user’s base form is the inability to leave footprints or crush living things inadvertently beneath one's feet (the user can still intentionally destroy things with their feet).
  • Prance of Swirling Cloud- When using their Zoan transformations the user of this fruit can jump upon clouds that appear beneath their feet, effectively granting them access to the “skywalk” technique. This can also allow the Kirin to mimic the effect of walking on water by walking on the clouds directly above a body of water.
  • Chimerical Majesty: Dragon- The Kirin is a beast with dragonlike scales, and a face resembling that of a stag with the brows of a dragon; though its majesty hardly compares to that of a true dragon, its imposing presence and the sheen of its scales are reminiscent of the scaly beasts of legend. As the scale color of the Kirin-fruit user is dictated by the dominant pigment of the user’s keratin, Doji’s scales are red. As opposed to true dragons, whose sheer power and durability are beyond the comprehension of most mortals, their Kirin cousin relies on its speed and healing abilities to compensate for its (comparatively) lower durability and strength; they pale in comparison to true Dragons in a number of other ways, their Zoan transformation is much smaller– taking on an ungulate shape not much larger than the user’s base form, they are far more susceptible to critical damage from skilled attackers (as opposed to dragons who are notoriously difficult to damage at all), their breath weapon is weaker and will lose in a clash against any true dragon, and their manner of flight is personal to the Kirin (and any riders) not allowing them to hold up large structures.
  • Chimerical Strength: Behemoth & Leviathan- The Kirin’s body carries the strength of a number of powerful terrestrial mammals, including the stag, ox, giraffe, and mammoth. The stomping of the mythical beast’s hooves is devastating when it acts against its gentle nature, the raw strength afforded to the user of this fruit is sufficient to allow them to lift and carry disproportionately heavy weights of up to 777 tons. In order to avoid needlessly killing weak opponents in combat the user must intentionally hold themselves back; typically this is easy for the good-hearted users of the Kirin fruit, however Doji finds it extremely difficult.

The following are weaknesses of the fruit, and it's current user:
  • Form Inaccessibility- The Kirin will not allow a user who is not pure of heart to use the fruit's full Zoan transformation unless the user's will is exponentially stronger than that of the fruit (Must have Ascended Conqueror's Haki), thus, Doji cannot currently gain access to this form.
  • Energy Requirement- While a user who is pure of heart has no trouble using the Kirin fruit, those who are impure, or outright evil, must spend a large amount of mental energy battling with the Kirin for control. Once the user has run out of energy (generally at the end of a combat), they will be completely exhausted and require one or more hours of rest to return to the strength of their normal form, only after several hours of rest and relaxation can the user then attempt to wrestle for control with their hybrid form again.
  • Afflicted: Flames of Judgment- An evil user of the flames of judgement will be eaten away themselves, however haki can be used to mitigate the speed at which the fire is able to do so. If the flames are allowed to devour the user without resistance, the evil-user will suffer internal burns that can only be properly treated via surgery.
  • Dietary Restriction: Meat- The user cannot intentionally eat meat, and if they do so accidentally, or are forced to, their digestive system becomes violently ill and they derive no nutritional value from the food.


Code:

[b]Ushi Ushi no Mi Model - Kirin (Ox-Ox fruit Model - Kirin)[/b] belongs to [url=https://www.revivaldawn.com/u524]Asakura Doji[/url].


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Gray
Gray
The Conqueror / Black Fist
[tracker=/t131-tracker-gray-starks#504]
Name : Gray
Epithet : "The Conqueror" / "Black Fist"
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" (310 cm)
Weight : 1043 lbs (473 kg)
Species : Cyborg Human
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Lurking Legend (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Role : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Bounty : [ber=r] 5,000,000,000
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.20
Shop Discount : -30%
Balance : [bel] 25,000,000,000
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This post has in-line assessment comments.Wed Jan 03, 2024 4:19 pm
[warn]I have to say that the Kirin was a poor choice for Doji, ultimately. Especially considering some of the abilities that you're trying to grant it. And for a fruit that seemingly has a will of its own (which is supposedly a thing with zoan fruits anyway), it seems all the more counterintuitive for the fruit to go to a user so unsuitable for it.

And, overall, I felt that a few of the abilities you associated with this fruit were a shoddy interpretation of the mythical creature's abilities.

The Qilin supposedly has the ability to tell between good and bad people. You could've played into that to grant Doji that extra-perceptive ability instead of the "cures blindness" nonsense.

You could've played into the fact that the Qilin could breathe fire by doing the same. Instead, you turned it into the more edgy "coats his fists with fire" thing.[/warn]

Doji wrote:Character Name: Asakura Doji
Devil Fruit Name: Ushi Ushi no Mi Model - Kirin (Ox-Ox Fruit Model- Kirin)
Type: Mythical Zoan
Description:
The Ushi Ushi no Mi Model - Kirin takes the form of a jade-ish blue pomegranate with a mane of golden fur surrounding its 7-pronged stem. Its skin is marred by the normal swirls of a devil fruit as well as a snake-scale texture that covers sections of the fruit's surface.

The fruit grants its user the ability to transform into a Kirin-hybrid and allows users who are good of heart (unlike Doji, who cannot currently make use of his fruit's full form) to transform into a full Kirin. The powers of the Kirin are as follows:
  • Serene Presence-The presence of the Kirin inspires tranquility in those around it, calming those fearful and angry in its presence. The presence of the user's Hybrid form exclusively affects willing allies, common animals, and weak-willed humanoids; the full-transformation is [dass]capable of inspiring peaceful feelings in any living being who is not actively using conqueror’s haki (these peaceful feelings do not dictate the behavior of affected characters)[cmt]It's explicitly shown in canon that even users who do not possess Conqueror's Haki can resist devil fruit powers by expending strong enough haki. Besides, the peaceful feelings not affecting someone's behaviour is kind of a cop-out and makes the ability kinda moot anyway.[/cmt][/dass].
  • Herald of Prophecy- [dass]The Kirin fruit finds its user only during periods of time where a great king or prophet will soon change the world. In addition, the Kirin is destined to aid in “paving the way” for these figures, whether they intend to or not.[cmt]This is an arbitrary thing that's more related to the theme of the fruit. You're welcome to play into this theme if the time ever comes for Doji to pave the way for the Pirate King. Otherwise, let's not bother stating it.[/cmt][/dass]
  • Purity of Body- In their Zoan transformation forms, the fruit user's body is freed from the effects of all physical imperfections and ailments; while this does not affect cosmetic damage (such as scars), or parts of the body that are missing (the user cannot regrow lost limbs), [dass]it does return functionality to parts of the body that have been crippled (such as blind eyes or broken limbs)[cmt]This feels like another weird cop-out for a character flaw that you added (against my recommendation, mind you) that you have not been able to play well. My expectation was that you improve your narration when writing from a blind character. Not that you give him a cure that effectively fixes his blindness so you can avoid working on improving Doji's narration.

    Not to mention this runs counter to the idea that the fruit doesn't cure permanent disabilities.[/cmt][/dass]. While this power does protect the user against the effects of poison and pathogens, it does not purge them from the body, and they will begin affecting the user of the fruit normally once they have left their Zoan transformation.
  • Providence- The Kirin's heartbeat is imbued with healing powers that allow the fruit's user to repair damage dealt to living things around them (including themselves). Those around the Kirin can tell when this ability is used, as they will hear the beat of the fruit-user's heart echo in their skull.
  • Flames of Judgment- The Kirin's flames of judgment appear as black-and-white flickering fires that sprout from the fruit user's wrists and ankles (in hybrid form). These flames do not burn what they devour from the outside in, but rather from the inside out. [dass]Though they do require oxygen to burn, they are extremely difficult to smother out and the flames of judgment’s intensity is proportional to the wickedness of what they are burning; they would simply dissipate if wreathed around an innocent child, they would only mildly burn a generally morally upstanding but flawed person, they would harshly burn a common criminal, and they would viciously incinerate a wanton murderer, tyrant, or war criminal. The user can employ these flames by coating their melee attacks, causing nearby enemies to burn from within, or by breathing the flames of judgment.[cmt]Considering Doji's own wickedness, I'm inclined to insist that you keep this power limited to the "full-form" of the fruit which requires a good heart - which Doji does not have. If Doji were to have this power, the first person his own power should burn is himself.[/cmt][/dass]
  • Seizing Brilliance- [dass]Those who have attempted to “hunt” the Kirin have been said to disappear in a bright white flash; as though suddenly smote down by some unseen divinity. In reality, the Kirin considers attempts to capture the fruit and prevent it from seeing the fulfillment of prophecy to be the highest act of wickedness, and thus it is capable of burning such opponents away to nothingness. Those who would plan to capture the Kirin must be prepared to die if they are unsuccessful.[cmt]Another example of how you're giving the fruit a strong will of its own yet giving it to a person unsuitable for it.[/cmt][/dass]
  • Pass Without Trace- An effect of this Devil Fruit that persists even into the user’s base form is the inability to leave footprints or [dass]crush living things inadvertently beneath one's feet[cmt]Can I assume he still retains the ability to stomp someone's face in? Cause that seems like a Doji thing to do.[/cmt][/dass].
  • Windswept Prance- [dass]When using their Zoan transformations the user of this fruit can jump upon air as though it were solid matter, effectively granting them access to the “skywalk” technique. This can also allow the Kirin to mimic the effect of walking on water by walking on the air directly above a body of water. Due to the force that the user can produce with their transformed lower-limbs, a user in hybrid form is capable of reaching speeds of up to mach 1; the full Kirin transformation can prance through the air at speeds as high as mach 7[cmt]Get rid of this and instead give him the ability to make and walk on small clouds, which is an actual thing suggested in Qilin myths.[/cmt][/dass].
  • Chimerical Majesty: Dragon- The Kirin is a beast with dragonlike scales, and a face resembling that of a stag with the brows of a dragon; though its majesty hardly compares to that of a true dragon, its imposing presence and the sheen of its scales are reminiscent of the scaly beasts of legend. As the scale color of the Kirin-fruit user is dictated by the dominant pigment of the user’s keratin, Doji’s scales are red. As opposed to true dragons, whose sheer power and durability are beyond the comprehension of most mortals, their Kirin cousin relies on its speed and healing abilities to compensate for its (comparatively) lower durability and strength; they pale in comparison to true Dragons in a number of other ways, their Zoan transformation is much smaller– taking on an ungulate shape not much larger than the user’s base form, they are far more susceptible to critical damage from skilled attackers (as opposed to dragons who are notoriously difficult to damage at all), their breath weapon is weaker and will lose in a clash against any true dragon, and their manner of flight is personal to the Kirin (and any riders) not allowing them to hold up large structures.
  • Chimerical Strength: Behemoth- The Kirin’s body carries the strength of a number of powerful terrestrial mammals, including the stag, ox, giraffe, and mammoth. The stomping of the mythical beast’s hooves is devastating when it acts against its gentle nature, the raw strength afforded to the user of this fruit is sufficient to allow them to lift and carry disproportionately heavy weights of up to 777 tons. In order to avoid needlessly killing weak opponents in combat the user must intentionally hold themselves back; typically this is easy for the good-hearted users of the Kirin fruit, however Doji finds it extremely difficult.
  • Chimerical Durability: Leviathan- [dass]The Kirin's body is dense and durable; combined with its armored scales and natural healing abilities, this makes causing lasting damage to the Kirin a difficult prospect; it is very difficult to sever or break the user’s body parts when they are in their Zoan forms.[cmt]This seems to run counter to the whole point about the Qilin's low durability and its heal factor compensating for the lower durability mentioned above. Zoans are already known to be sturdy anyway. You don't need to bother stating it.[/cmt][/dass]

The following are weaknesses of the fruit, and it's current user:
  • Form Inaccessibility- The Kirin will not allow a user who is not pure of heart to use the fruit's full Zoan transformation unless the user's will is exponentially stronger than that of the fruit (Must have Ascended Conqueror's Haki), thus, Doji cannot currently gain access to this form.
  • Energy Requirement- While a user who is pure of heart has no trouble using the Kirin fruit, those who are impure, or outright evil, must spend a large amount of mental energy battling with the Kirin for control. Once the user has run out of energy (generally at the end of a combat), they will be completely exhausted and require one or more hours of rest to return to the strength of their normal form, only after several hours of rest and relaxation can the user then attempt to wrestle for control with their hybrid form again.
  • Dietary Restriction: Meat- The user cannot intentionally eat meat, and if they do so accidentally, or are forced to, their digestive system becomes violently ill and they derive no nutritional value from the food.


Code:

[b]Ushi Ushi no Mi Model - Kirin (Ox-Ox fruit Model - Kirin)[/b] belongs to [url=https://www.revivaldawn.com/u524]Asakura Doji[/url].
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Gray
The Conqueror / Black Fist
[tracker=/t131-tracker-gray-starks#504]
Name : Gray
Epithet : "The Conqueror" / "Black Fist"
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" (310 cm)
Weight : 1043 lbs (473 kg)
Species : Cyborg Human
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Lurking Legend (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Role : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Bounty : [ber=r] 5,000,000,000
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.20
Shop Discount : -30%
Balance : [bel] 25,000,000,000
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This post has in-line assessment comments.Wed Jan 03, 2024 6:35 pm
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Doji wrote:Character Name: Asakura Doji
Devil Fruit Name: Ushi Ushi no Mi Model - Kirin (Ox-Ox Fruit Model- Kirin)
Type: Mythical Zoan
Description:
The Ushi Ushi no Mi Model - Kirin takes the form of a jade-ish blue pomegranate with a mane of golden fur surrounding its 7-pronged stem. Its skin is marred by the normal swirls of a devil fruit as well as a snake-scale texture that covers sections of the fruit's surface.

The fruit grants its user the ability to transform into a Kirin-hybrid and allows users who are good of heart (unlike Doji, who cannot currently make use of his fruit's full form) to transform into a full Kirin. The powers of the Kirin are as follows:
  • Serene Presence-The presence of the Kirin inspires tranquility in those around it, calming those fearful and angry in its presence. The presence of the user's Hybrid form exclusively affects willing allies, common animals, and weak-willed humanoids.
  • Providence- The Kirin's heartbeat is imbued with healing powers that allow the fruit's user to repair damage dealt to living things around them (including themselves). Those around the Kirin can tell when this ability is used, as they will hear the beat of the fruit-user's heart echo in their skull.
  • Horn of Higher Calling- The Kirin has a single antler that sprouts from the left side of its skull, this horn is borderline unbreakable and courses with gleaming golden energy. [dass]In "head-to-head" conflicts with other horned beasts, the Kirin will almost inevitably win, as it's "unicorn-like" antler carries a mystical strength and resiliency.[cmt]Completely unnecessary and factually inaccurate.[/cmt][/dass]
  • Flames of Judgment- The Kirin's flames of judgment appear as black-and-white flickering fires that sprout from the fruit user's wrists and ankles (in hybrid form). The user can employ these flames by coating their melee attacks, causing nearby enemies to burn from within, or by breathing the flames of judgment as a breath weapon. When used as a breath weapon, the volume of flames that the user can breathe is enormous. The flames do not burn what they devour from the outside in, but rather from the inside out. Though they do require oxygen to burn, they are extremely difficult to smother out and the flames of judgment’s intensity is proportional to the wickedness of what they are burning; they would simply dissipate if wreathed around an innocent child, they would only mildly burn a generally morally upstanding but flawed person, they would harshly burn a common criminal, and they would viciously incinerate a wanton murderer, tyrant, or war criminal.
  • Pass Without Trace- An effect of this Devil Fruit that persists even into the user’s base form is the inability to leave footprints or crush living things inadvertently beneath one's feet (the user can still intentionally destroy things with their feet).
  • Prance of Swirling Cloud- When using their Zoan transformations the user of this fruit can jump upon clouds that appear beneath their feet, effectively granting them access to the “skywalk” technique. This can also allow the Kirin to mimic the effect of walking on water by walking on the [dass]air[cmt]By walking on clouds that they generate directly above a body of water.[/cmt][/dass] directly above a body of water. [dass]Due to the force that the user can produce with their transformed lower-limbs, a user in hybrid form is capable of reaching speeds of up to mach 1; the full Kirin transformation can prance through the air at speeds as high as mach 7.[cmt]Let's not get so specific with exact speeds. Perceived speed is usually more important in story-telling anyway.[/cmt][/dass]
  • Chimerical Majesty: Dragon- The Kirin is a beast with dragonlike scales, and a face resembling that of a stag with the brows of a dragon; though its majesty hardly compares to that of a true dragon, its imposing presence and the sheen of its scales are reminiscent of the scaly beasts of legend. As the scale color of the Kirin-fruit user is dictated by the dominant pigment of the user’s keratin, Doji’s scales are red. As opposed to true dragons, whose sheer power and durability are beyond the comprehension of most mortals, their Kirin cousin relies on its speed and healing abilities to compensate for its (comparatively) lower durability and strength; they pale in comparison to true Dragons in a number of other ways, their Zoan transformation is much smaller– taking on an ungulate shape not much larger than the user’s base form, they are far more susceptible to critical damage from skilled attackers (as opposed to dragons who are notoriously difficult to damage at all), their breath weapon is weaker and will lose in a clash against any true dragon, and their manner of flight is personal to the Kirin (and any riders) not allowing them to hold up large structures.
  • Chimerical Strength: Behemoth- The Kirin’s body carries the strength of a number of powerful terrestrial mammals, including the stag, ox, giraffe, and mammoth. The stomping of the mythical beast’s hooves is devastating when it acts against its gentle nature, the raw strength afforded to the user of this fruit is sufficient to allow them to lift and carry disproportionately heavy weights of up to 777 tons. In order to avoid needlessly killing weak opponents in combat the user must intentionally hold themselves back; typically this is easy for the good-hearted users of the Kirin fruit, however Doji finds it extremely difficult.
  • Chimerical Resistance: Leviathan- [dass]The Kirin's body is dense, durable, and resistant to most toxins; the natural resistances of the Kirin's body make it immune to all common diseases and poisons (Devil Fruit-based or artificially-engineered toxins and diseases affect the user's body as normal).[cmt]This ability is also extra and unnecessary. Purge it. Doji can become naturally resilient against diseases without shoe-horning it into the fruit. It's not unheard of in this universe.

    Alternatively, if you really wanna keep it then make it a post-awakening ability and frame it as an ability to "purge evil from the user's body". But, also make it dependent on Doji's will to resist being purged himself since he's still gonna stay evil. This would, of course, not be able to protect him from any "evil" that is too strong for him to purge (i.e. any afflictions caused by strong opponents).[/cmt][/dass]

The following are weaknesses of the fruit, and it's current user:
  • Form Inaccessibility- The Kirin will not allow a user who is not pure of heart to use the fruit's full Zoan transformation unless the user's will is exponentially stronger than that of the fruit (Must have Ascended Conqueror's Haki), thus, Doji cannot currently gain access to this form.
  • Energy Requirement- While a user who is pure of heart has no trouble using the Kirin fruit, those who are impure, or outright evil, must spend a large amount of mental energy battling with the Kirin for control. Once the user has run out of energy (generally at the end of a combat), they will be completely exhausted and require one or more hours of rest to return to the strength of their normal form, only after several hours of rest and relaxation can the user then attempt to wrestle for control with their hybrid form again.
  • Afflicted: Flames of Judgment- An evil user of the flames of judgement will be eaten away themselves, however haki can be used to mitigate the speed at which the fire is able to do so. If the flames are allowed to devour the user without resistance, the evil-user will suffer internal burns that can only be properly treated via surgery.
  • Dietary Restriction: Meat- The user cannot intentionally eat meat, and if they do so accidentally, or are forced to, their digestive system becomes violently ill and they derive no nutritional value from the food.


Code:

[b]Ushi Ushi no Mi Model - Kirin (Ox-Ox fruit Model - Kirin)[/b] belongs to [url=https://www.revivaldawn.com/u524]Asakura Doji[/url].
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The Conqueror / Black Fist
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Name : Gray
Epithet : "The Conqueror" / "Black Fist"
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" (310 cm)
Weight : 1043 lbs (473 kg)
Species : Cyborg Human
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Lurking Legend (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Role : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Bounty : [ber=r] 5,000,000,000
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.20
Shop Discount : -30%
Balance : [bel] 25,000,000,000
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This post has in-line assessment comments.Wed Jan 03, 2024 6:50 pm
[approve]Doji is now officially a yokai. [[mythicalzoan]] consumed from your inventory.[/approve]

Doji wrote:Character Name: Asakura Doji
Devil Fruit Name: Ushi Ushi no Mi Model - Kirin (Ox-Ox Fruit Model- Kirin)
Type: Mythical Zoan
Description:
The Ushi Ushi no Mi Model - Kirin takes the form of a jade-ish blue pomegranate with a mane of golden fur surrounding its 7-pronged stem. Its skin is marred by the normal swirls of a devil fruit as well as a snake-scale texture that covers sections of the fruit's surface.

The fruit grants its user the ability to transform into a Kirin-hybrid and allows users who are good of heart (unlike Doji, who cannot currently make use of his fruit's full form) to transform into a full Kirin. The powers of the Kirin are as follows:
  • Serene Presence-The presence of the Kirin inspires tranquility in those around it, calming those fearful and angry in its presence. The presence of the user's Hybrid form exclusively affects willing allies, common animals, and weak-willed humanoids.
  • Providence- The Kirin's heartbeat is imbued with healing powers that allow the fruit's user to repair damage dealt to living things around them (including themselves). Those around the Kirin can tell when this ability is used, as they will hear the beat of the fruit-user's heart echo in their skull.
  • Horn of Higher Calling- The Kirin has a single antler that sprouts from the left side of its skull, this horn is borderline unbreakable and courses with gleaming golden energy. In "head-to-head" conflicts the kirin has a devastating weapon.
  • Flames of Judgment- The Kirin's flames of judgment appear as black-and-white flickering fires that sprout from the fruit user's wrists and ankles (in hybrid form). The user can employ these flames by coating their melee attacks, causing nearby enemies to burn from within, or by breathing the flames of judgment as a breath weapon. When used as a breath weapon, the volume of flames that the user can breathe is enormous. The flames do not burn what they devour from the outside in, but rather from the inside out. Though they do require oxygen to burn, they are extremely difficult to smother out and the flames of judgment’s intensity is proportional to the wickedness of what they are burning; they would simply dissipate if wreathed around an innocent child, they would only mildly burn a generally morally upstanding but flawed person, they would harshly burn a common criminal, and they would viciously incinerate a wanton murderer, tyrant, or war criminal.
  • Pass Without Trace- An effect of this Devil Fruit that persists even into the user’s base form is the inability to leave footprints or crush living things inadvertently beneath one's feet (the user can still intentionally destroy things with their feet).
  • Prance of Swirling Cloud- When using their Zoan transformations the user of this fruit can jump upon clouds that appear beneath their feet, effectively granting them access to the “skywalk” technique. This can also allow the Kirin to mimic the effect of walking on water by walking on the clouds directly above a body of water.
  • Chimerical Majesty: Dragon- The Kirin is a beast with dragonlike scales, and a face resembling that of a stag with the brows of a dragon; though its majesty hardly compares to that of a true dragon, its imposing presence and the sheen of its scales are reminiscent of the scaly beasts of legend. As the scale color of the Kirin-fruit user is dictated by the dominant pigment of the user’s keratin, Doji’s scales are red. As opposed to true dragons, whose sheer power and durability are beyond the comprehension of most mortals, their Kirin cousin relies on its speed and healing abilities to compensate for its (comparatively) lower durability and strength; they pale in comparison to true Dragons in a number of other ways, their Zoan transformation is much smaller– taking on an ungulate shape not much larger than the user’s base form, they are far more susceptible to critical damage from skilled attackers (as opposed to dragons who are notoriously difficult to damage at all), their breath weapon is weaker and will lose in a clash against any true dragon, and their manner of flight is personal to the Kirin (and any riders) not allowing them to hold up large structures.
  • Chimerical Strength: Behemoth & Leviathan- The Kirin’s body carries the strength of a number of powerful terrestrial mammals, including the stag, ox, giraffe, and mammoth. The stomping of the mythical beast’s hooves is devastating when it acts against its gentle nature, the raw strength afforded to the user of this fruit is sufficient to allow them to lift and carry disproportionately heavy weights of up to 777 tons. In order to avoid needlessly killing weak opponents in combat the user must intentionally hold themselves back; typically this is easy for the good-hearted users of the Kirin fruit, however Doji finds it extremely difficult.

The following are weaknesses of the fruit, and it's current user:
  • Form Inaccessibility- The Kirin will not allow a user who is not pure of heart to use the fruit's full Zoan transformation unless the user's will is exponentially stronger than that of the fruit (Must have Ascended Conqueror's Haki), thus, Doji cannot currently gain access to this form.
  • Energy Requirement- While a user who is pure of heart has no trouble using the Kirin fruit, those who are impure, or outright evil, must spend a large amount of mental energy battling with the Kirin for control. Once the user has run out of energy (generally at the end of a combat), they will be completely exhausted and require one or more hours of rest to return to the strength of their normal form, only after several hours of rest and relaxation can the user then attempt to wrestle for control with their hybrid form again.
  • Afflicted: Flames of Judgment- An evil user of the flames of judgement will be eaten away themselves, however haki can be used to mitigate the speed at which the fire is able to do so. If the flames are allowed to devour the user without resistance, the evil-user will suffer internal burns that can only be properly treated via surgery.
  • Dietary Restriction: Meat- The user cannot intentionally eat meat, and if they do so accidentally, or are forced to, their digestive system becomes violently ill and they derive no nutritional value from the food.


Code:

[b]Ushi Ushi no Mi Model - Kirin (Ox-Ox fruit Model - Kirin)[/b] belongs to [url=https://www.revivaldawn.com/u524]Asakura Doji[/url].
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This post has in-line assessment comments.Tue Jan 09, 2024 6:39 am

Character Name: N/a In process of creating, not decided on name as fruit impacts
Devil Fruit Name: Kumo Kumo No Mi Model garden
Type: Zoan
Description:
The Kumo Kumo no mi gives the user the properties of a spider, from the basic aspects of increased strength, reflexes and an awareness of the area around them through vibrations and the ability to open additional eyes.

- Produce strong silk, anesthesia and strong poison substances.
- Able to Stick,Run or climb up walls
- Able to regrow lost body part through a process called molting, this process normally takes 8 hours or more depending on which part.
1.Silk[joints] has healing properties and can help many injuries to one self or someone else [not mechanical and requires techniques]
2. anesthesia [sweat] - this is a paralleling poison, in small amount simply numbs or calms a specific area, in large amounts can cause paralyses. Mechanically it makes the user able to handle pain easier, however, for the most part requires techniques
3. Poison[teeth] - access to a substance that is designed to kill someone over a period of time

Form 1 : Human - Mostly looks human bar form four teeth within the mouth that are more pointed and closer to fangs than teeth but only slightly [These are the teeth that Poison if used to bite down on someone. They have the benefits of the physical strength of the spider to a certain extent. Web/silk comes from wrist,butt or feet. They also sweat anesthesia, however most people won't really notice the difference other than sometimes with 2 much contact become numb.

Form 2 :Hybrid Very similar to Form 1 but the user grows additional limbs[max 8], opens extra eyes. They become more physically stronger and extra limbs are normally spider like, not human like, fangs also grow to the point of reaching outside the mouth

form 3: Becomes a spider with no human aspects to speak off.

Code:

[b]Your Devil fruit's name (include the English name in parentheses)[/b] belongs to [url=link to your user profile]Your character's name[/url].
Nico Page
Nico Page
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Name : Nico Page
Age : 25
Height : 6'1"
Weight : 165 lbs
Species : Human
Faction : New Revolutionary Army
Balance : [bel] 50,000
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Character Name: Bisco
Devil Fruit Name: Bisu Bisu no Mi | Biscuit-Biscuit Fruit
Type: Paramecia
Description: Bisu Bisu no Mi is a Paramecia-type Devil Fruit that allows the user to generate and manipulate biscuits at will, making them a Biscuit Human.

Strengths
  • Can conjure near-limitless amounts of biscuits
  • Create golems/large humanoid figures or weapons out of biscuits by crushing the biscuits into fine crumbs/powder and molding the crumbs into the shape the user desires
  • The biscuits are extremely hard akin to hardtack and the strength of biscuits can be further enhanced by Haki (Busoshoku Haki)

Weaknesses
  • The biscuits can be shattered with sufficient force
  • The biscuits can be weakened by water
  • The biscuits could be eaten
  • Conjuring biscuits can take a toll on the user’s stamina if used extensively
  • The user needs to clap to produce the biscuits
  • Standard Devil Fruit weaknesses

Code:

[b]Bisu-Bisu no Mi (Biscuit-Biscuit)[/b] belongs to [url=https://www.revivaldawn.com/u678]Bisco[/url].
Gray
Gray
The Conqueror / Black Fist
[tracker=/t131-tracker-gray-starks#504]
Name : Gray
Epithet : "The Conqueror" / "Black Fist"
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" (310 cm)
Weight : 1043 lbs (473 kg)
Species : Cyborg Human
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Lurking Legend (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Role : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Bounty : [ber=r] 5,000,000,000
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.20
Shop Discount : -30%
Balance : [bel] 25,000,000,000
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This post has in-line assessment comments.Tue Jan 09, 2024 5:53 pm
[approve]I'm glad you kept the clapping.
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Bisco wrote:Character Name: Bisco
Devil Fruit Name: Bisu Bisu no Mi | Biscuit-Biscuit Fruit
Type: Paramecia
Description: Bisu Bisu no Mi is a Paramecia-type Devil Fruit that allows the user to generate and manipulate biscuits at will, making them a Biscuit Human.

Strengths
  • Can conjure near-limitless amounts of biscuits
  • Create golems/large humanoid figures or weapons out of biscuits by crushing the biscuits into fine crumbs/powder and molding the crumbs into the shape the user desires
  • The biscuits are extremely hard akin to hardtack and the strength of biscuits can be further enhanced by Haki (Busoshoku Haki)

Weaknesses
  • The biscuits can be shattered with sufficient force
  • The biscuits can be weakened by water
  • The biscuits could be eaten
  • Conjuring biscuits can take a toll on the user’s stamina if used extensively
  • The user needs to clap to produce the biscuits
  • Standard Devil Fruit weaknesses

Code:

[b]Bisu-Bisu no Mi (Biscuit-Biscuit)[/b] belongs to [url=https://www.revivaldawn.com/u678]Bisco[/url].
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This post has in-line assessment comments.Mon Jan 22, 2024 11:19 pm
Character Name: Flash Morgan
   Devil Fruit Name: Taiyō Taiyō no Mi / (Sun Sun Fruit)
   Type: Paramecia
   Description: The Taiyō Taiyō no Mi allows the user to absorb the rays from the sun which can be harnessed for a variety of purposes, turning the user into a Solar Powered Human.

With the absorbed sunlight, the user can:

-  Enhance their physical strength

- Can harness the sunlight they absorbed to attack with beams or waves of solar energy that are hot to the touch. The user can also harness the sunlight for harmless purposes such as being a source of light or blinding others.

- Has the potential to generate solar flares that can disrupt electronic devices

Drawbacks are as follows:

- The user needs to absorb the sun's rays in order for its abilities to work, making it useless during the night or if clouds are obstructing the sun among other things. (The user has the potential to store a limited amount of solar energy from the sun for later use, but Flash has yet to develop this ability)

- Standard Devil Fruit weaknesses


   
Code:

    [b]Taiyō Taiyō no Mi (Sun Sun Fruit)[/b] belongs to [url=https://www.revivaldawn.com/u674]Flash Morgan[/url].
Gray
Gray
The Conqueror / Black Fist
[tracker=/t131-tracker-gray-starks#504]
Name : Gray
Epithet : "The Conqueror" / "Black Fist"
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" (310 cm)
Weight : 1043 lbs (473 kg)
Species : Cyborg Human
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Lurking Legend (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Role : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Bounty : [ber=r] 5,000,000,000
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.20
Shop Discount : -30%
Balance : [bel] 25,000,000,000
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This post has in-line assessment comments.Tue Jan 23, 2024 10:28 am
[reject]A fairly reasonable proposal, but I'll have to deny this claim for the same reason that I've denied similar claims before. This fruit infringes on what I believe to be the applications of the Forest-Forest Fruit. That fruit is essentially powered by the sun through the process of photosynthesis.

Besides, a guy with lightning bolt-shaped eyebrows would seem strange with abilities completely unrelated, don't ya think?[/reject]

Flash Morgan wrote:Character Name: Flash Morgan
   Devil Fruit Name: Taiyō Taiyō no Mi / (Sun Sun Fruit)
   Type: Paramecia
   Description: The Taiyō Taiyō no Mi allows the user to absorb the rays from the sun which can be harnessed for a variety of purposes, turning the user into a Solar Powered Human.

With the absorbed sunlight, the user can:

-  Enhance their physical strength

- Can harness the sunlight they absorbed to attack with beams or waves of solar energy that are hot to the touch. The user can also harness the sunlight for harmless purposes such as being a source of light or blinding others.

- Has the potential to generate solar flares that can disrupt electronic devices

Drawbacks are as follows:

- The user needs to absorb the sun's rays in order for its abilities to work, making it useless during the night or if clouds are obstructing the sun among other things. (The user has the potential to store a limited amount of solar energy from the sun for later use, but Flash has yet to develop this ability)

- Standard Devil Fruit weaknesses


   
Code:

    [b]Taiyō Taiyō no Mi (Sun Sun Fruit)[/b] belongs to [url=https://www.revivaldawn.com/u674]Flash Morgan[/url].

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