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Vikrum Belmont. Empty Vikrum Belmont.

This post has in-line assessment comments.Sat Jan 11, 2020 12:18 pm

Vikrum Belmont.


Basic Character Information


Starting Bonus: Pocket Change. | [Starting Bonus Roll]

First Name: Vikrum.
Middle Name/Initial: N/A
Last Name: Belmont.
Epithet: Fallen Knight.
Age: Twenty-nine.
Gender: Male.
Race: Human.
Faction: Pirate.
Profession: Swordsman.


Physical Appearance


Height: 6'2"
Weight: 160 lbs

Hair Style: Vikrum has straight black shoulder length hair that hangs tangled behind his head.
Hair Color: Black.
Eye Color: Green.
Scars: His body is covered with scars and lesions. Raised bumpy skin is visible on most appendages.

Clothing and Accessories: Vikrum's torso is covered by a long sleeved white shirt. The neckline is cut into a deep 'v', while also having frills at the cuffs. Underneath his clothes are white linen bandages that wrap his entire body. So where one might look to find exposed flesh,  like in the 'v' collar of his shirt or his hands, one would only find bandages. His right arm is fully armored by the remnants of his Knightly garb. A steel shoulder armlet connected to a gauntlet. This is secured to his torso by two leather straps that criss-cross around his abdomen. Draped around his shoulders is the yellow cloak of his former order.

His head is clad in a steel ornate Knight's helm, which he is never seen without. To eat he simply lifts the visor. Around Vikrum's wast is a green sash. Tucked in the sash is his rapier. He wears simple black pants and boots.

Description: Just a few inches over the average height and thinly built. With a slight stoop of the shoulders. His left eye is a sharp dark green with a golden ring around the iris. While his right is that of pale marble, glazed over with dead nerves. His body is greatly deformed from Leprosy. Bulging lesions speckles his face, reddening his pale white skin. The knuckles of his fingers are calloused with these lesions. Vikrum is missing three fingers. Both ring fingers were amputated at the first knuckle. While the middle finger on his right hand is completely missing.



The Past


Main Traits: Chivalrous. Psychotic. Forgetful.
Likes: Duels. Red wine. Polina.
Dislikes: Home. Dishonor. Mockery.
Unique laugh: Gegegege

Hometown: Ilusia (West Blue)
Personality: A odd individual to be sure. Madness and chivalry all mixed into one. His mind has slipped into the depths of psychosis with only brief flashes of who he once was, sprouting in the littlest of deeds. The Vikrum that exists now is solely guided by his ambition, and does not think twice of those he harms. His fate is well known to him, so he takes chances that a sane man wouldn't. Overreaching and often pushing himself to his limits. In daily life he is irritable and antisocial. He frequently drinks wine to ease the pain of his joints. His memory is fading and struggles with little details about tasks. This failing can often set him into a psychotic fit of crying or aggression.

The only sacred thing left to him is the sword. He follows it and worships the blade. Believing it is the only true way to redemption (most likely a delusion). Finding a zen like piece in crossing blades. The ecstasy of combat seems to be the only abatement of his aching body, though dueling often worsens his condition. Vikrum treats his opponents with the upmost respect, allowing them to pick up their swords if they have been disarmed. Seeing it as dishonorable to kill a unarmed man.

Journal Log 1:

Journal Log 2:


Last edited by Vikrum Belmont on Sun Jan 12, 2020 8:15 pm; edited 1 time in total
Gray
Gray
The Conqueror / Black Fist
[tracker=/t131-tracker-gray-starks#504]
Name : Gray
Epithet : "The Conqueror"; "Black Fist"
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" (310 cm)
Weight : 1043 lbs (473 kg)
Species/Tribe : Cyborg Human
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Lurking Legend (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Role : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Bounty : [ber=r] 5,000,000,000
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.20
Shop Discount : -30%
Balance : [bel] 25,000,000,000
[[strollingdeath]][[baneoftheweak]][[riseandshine]][[childofdestiny]][[freakofnature]]
[[punchoutguru]][[dulcetvirtuoso]]

[[improviseadaptovercome]]
Posts : 3985

Vikrum Belmont. Empty Re: Vikrum Belmont.

This post has in-line assessment comments.Sun Jan 12, 2020 4:36 am
This was quite an interesting read! I really enjoyed the journal log format. Vikrum's is a dismal tale which I hope ends on a happier note for him.

I'm not sure if you wanted this to be graded yet, but if you are ready for it to be approved, please let me know and I shall do so. Before I do though, there is one small correction I'd like you to make: "Hoard D Marsh" is actually "Hoard Marsh". His real name is "Hoar D. Marsh", but that name didn't become known until the Conqueror's War.

Also, once again, I invite you to join us on Discord if you haven't done so already! We have an Approval Requests channel on Discord where you can request approvals for completed items. Alternatively, you can also request approvals in the Waiting Room, but that thread may have slower responses.
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Vikrum Belmont. Empty Re: Vikrum Belmont.

This post has in-line assessment comments.Sun Jan 12, 2020 8:22 pm
Edit made, and yes I'm ready for it to be graded. Thanks!
Emi Roromiya
Emi Roromiya
Vikrum Belmont. CHwDBFC
[tracker=/t1015-emi-roromiya#4973]
Name : Emi Roromiya
Epithet : Smiling Slayer
Age : 17
Height : 5'5"
Weight : 130 lbs
Species/Tribe : Human
Faction : Pirate
World Position : N/A
Crew : Meddling Kids
Ship : The Scorned Lady
Crew Role : Navigator/ First Mate
Devil Fruit : N/A
Bounty : [ber=r] 31,600,000
Balance : [ber] 22,050,000
Posts : 117

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This post has in-line assessment comments.Sun Jan 12, 2020 10:51 pm
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Vikrum Belmont wrote:

Vikrum Belmont.


Basic Character Information


Starting Bonus: Pocket Change. | [Starting Bonus Roll]

First Name: Vikrum.
Middle Name/Initial: N/A
Last Name: Belmont.
Epithet: Fallen Knight.
Age: Twenty-nine.
Gender: Male.
Race: Human.
Faction: Pirate.
Profession: Swordsman.


Physical Appearance


Height: 6'2"
Weight: 160 lbs

Hair Style: Vikrum has straight black shoulder length hair that hangs tangled behind his head.
Hair Color: Black.
Eye Color: Green.
Scars: His body is covered with scars and lesions. Raised bumpy skin is visible on most appendages.

Clothing and Accessories: Vikrum's torso is covered by a long sleeved white shirt. The neckline is cut into a deep 'v', while also having frills at the cuffs. Underneath his clothes are white linen bandages that wrap his entire body. So where one might look to find exposed flesh,  like in the 'v' collar of his shirt or his hands, one would only find bandages. His right arm is fully armored by the remnants of his Knightly garb. A steel shoulder armlet connected to a gauntlet. This is secured to his torso by two leather straps that criss-cross around his abdomen. Draped around his shoulders is the yellow cloak of his former order.

His head is clad in a steel ornate Knight's helm, which he is never seen without. To eat he simply lifts the visor. Around Vikrum's wast is a green sash. Tucked in the sash is his rapier. He wears simple black pants and boots.

Description: Just a few inches over the average height and thinly built. With a slight stoop of the shoulders. His left eye is a sharp dark green with a golden ring around the iris. While his right is that of pale marble, glazed over with dead nerves. His body is greatly deformed from Leprosy. Bulging lesions speckles his face, reddening his pale white skin. The knuckles of his fingers are calloused with these lesions. Vikrum is missing three fingers. Both ring fingers were amputated at the first knuckle. While the middle finger on his right hand is completely missing.



The Past


Main Traits: Chivalrous. Psychotic. Forgetful.
Likes: Duels. Red wine. Polina.
Dislikes: Home. Dishonor. Mockery.
Unique laugh: Chichichichichichi

Hometown: Ilusia (West Blue)
Personality: A odd individual to be sure. Madness and chivalry all mixed into one. His mind has slipped into the depths of psychosis with only brief flashes of who he once was, sprouting in the littlest of deeds. The Vikrum that exists now is solely guided by his ambition, and does not think twice of those he harms. His fate is well known to him, so he takes chances that a sane man wouldn't. Overreaching and often pushing himself to his limits. In daily life he is irritable and antisocial. He frequently drinks wine to ease the pain of his joints. His memory is fading and struggles with little details about tasks. This failing can often set him into a psychotic fit of crying or aggression.

The only sacred thing left to him is the sword. He follows it and worships the blade. Believing it is the only true way to redemption (most likely a delusion). Finding a zen like piece in crossing blades. The ecstasy of combat seems to be the only abatement of his aching body, though dueling often worsens his condition. Vikrum treats his opponents with the upmost respect, allowing them to pick up their swords if they have been disarmed. Seeing it as dishonorable to kill a unarmed man.

Journal Log 1:

Journal Log 2:

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